Reply To: New Text Errors

#19591
Ned Stark
Participant

1)
I think you meant to say, “handlers” instead of “handles”

2)
I believe that this first sentence would sound better if you wrote it as…

“The battle’s settled, as is a wager or two that the men had.”

(Include comma, add the word “that”)
Just a suggestion, of course.

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"It is not death that a man should fear, but he should fear never beginning to live." ~Marcus Aurelius

Game: "Characters with a height advantage against their opponents are harder to hit"
Me: "That's not true, and my short axeman is living proof!"