Reply To: New Text Errors

Ned Stark


It’d sound better if you changed the word “started” to -> “start”
If you change the end of the sentence, “… if we don’t finish what we’ve started.”

For the blue underline, if you’re Having Alwin reply to Asgeir in this case…
It may be a better choice for the sentence to flow like this:

“Alwin the Champion replies to Asgeir with a pad on the shoulder, “But you are already known in every tavern and alehouse in the land for falling asleep in your beer”.

You do not need the comma between “land” and “for”.

"It is not death that a man should fear, but he should fear never beginning to live." ~Marcus Aurelius

Game: "Characters with a height advantage against their opponents are harder to hit"
Me: "That's not true, and my short axeman is living proof!"