Reply To: New Text Errors

[Ned Stark]

For the “Horrified” tooltip, you should switch “and” to “is”.

For the second image, you certainly do not need the comma that I underlined.

Also for the second image, unless you’re actually having the Captain state… “You ask, ‘What the hell was that?'” (in that case it’d be fine)…. I think it’d sound better if you switched, “You ask what the hell was that.” to -> “You ask what the hell that was.”

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