Topic: Text errors
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During camp (training event)
“.. ,but they’ll ya safe.” – maybe it should be “keep ya safe” or “hold“?
“If an armored bruted gets past..” – brute ?
“His servant reluctantly holds a nail up by the man hammers it home.”
Here ‘by’ should be replaced with ‘while’, I think. Otherwise this sentence sounds weird.
And in continuation: shoulder
He puts one hand, but somehow manages both shoulders? Shouldn’t be used in plural.
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