Topic: Text errors

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  • #18656
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    During camp (training event)

    “.. ,but they’ll ya safe.” – maybe it should be “keep ya safe” or “hold“?
    “If an armored bruted gets past..” – brute ?

    #18657
    Avatar photoRap
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    Yep, that’s also been fixed.

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    #18702
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    statuette

    #18703
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    Fixed.

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    #18788
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    neighbors

    #18789
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    Fixed.

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    #18794
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    feriouciously = ferociously

    #18795
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    Fixed.

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    #18900
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    disappear

    #18904
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    “His servant reluctantly holds a nail up by the man hammers it home.”

    Here ‘by’ should be replaced with ‘while’, I think. Otherwise this sentence sounds weird.

    And in continuation: shoulder

    He puts one hand, but somehow manages both shoulders? Shouldn’t be used in plural.

    #18905
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    Fixed.

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    #18923
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    people – if it’s used to say about population and not about races/ethnicities/nations…

    #18924
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    Around – unless he’s round as a ball now

    returns to the ranks ..

    #18925
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    Fixed.

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    #18926
    Avatar photoRahziel
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    In the event where a poor man tries to steal your stuff..

    scoundrel

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